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My first UnBook. I like it, but I'd like to know what other people think of it. My last Pee Review Request got ignored, but i have better hopes for this one. --MaxPayne 19:04, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

MaxPayne 19:04, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 8 Offbeat and zany. I like that
Concept: 7 I thought it would be boring. It wasn't.
Prose and formatting: 7 Appropriate, no, perfect prose
Images: 5 Needs work. Less with the guns. Typewriters. Full ashtrays.
Miscellaneous: 7 Good stuff with the working in of the "spoilers"
Final Score: 34 Please do more like this. For me.
Reviewer: Pieface
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