My first UnBook. I like it, but I'd like to know what other people think of it. My last Pee Review Request got ignored, but i have better hopes for this one. --MaxPayne 19:04, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
MaxPayne 19:04, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
||Offbeat and zany. I like that
||I thought it would be boring. It wasn't.
|Prose and formatting:
||Appropriate, no, perfect prose
||Needs work. Less with the guns. Typewriters. Full ashtrays.
||Good stuff with the working in of the "spoilers"
||Please do more like this. For me.