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So I decided to spend my afternoon rewriting this in several areas. I was quite satisfied with the first review by UU and was I quite tempted by the mention of VFH. The largest problem appeared to be the consistency and tone of the prose, as well as the flow. I had another crack at the article, adding another image in the process. I transformed the instances within the text that seemed to make the 'British Gentleman' character rather irrelevant.

Anyway, the reason I want a quick review is because I wish to see if this article is in the path of VFH nomination, though suggestions can't hurt. --SoIwastolazytolearnGermanic.jpg-kun "whisper sweet nothings into thine ear..." 17:43, 24 February 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 10 Haha, This is a very funny article, I recommend this for VFH.
Concept: 10 The concept is very good, I wasn't expecting it at all.
Prose and formatting: 10 Well written, all good so far.
Images: 10 I especially like the one with the cowboy, genius.
Miscellaneous: 10 Because I still have no idea what this section means but averages at 10
Final Score: 50 I recommend this for VFH.
Reviewer: --Projectmayhem666 Talk 17:52, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
Looks like I got the best score in the world then. --SoIwastolazytolearnGermanic.jpg-kun "whisper sweet nothings into thine ear..." 17:59, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
Theres nothing wrong with the article and I like it, I've seen worse featured.--Projectmayhem666 Talk 18:02, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
Thanks for the review, the score was a tad generous though. :) --SoIwastolazytolearnGermanic.jpg-kun "whisper sweet nothings into thine ear..." 18:05, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
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