So I decided to spend my afternoon rewriting this in several areas. I was quite satisfied with the first review by UU and was I quite tempted by the mention of VFH. The largest problem appeared to be the consistency and tone of the prose, as well as the flow. I had another crack at the article, adding another image in the process. I transformed the instances within the text that seemed to make the 'British Gentleman' character rather irrelevant.
Anyway, the reason I want a quick review is because I wish to see if this article is in the path of VFH nomination, though suggestions can't hurt. ---kun "whisper sweet nothings into thine ear..." 17:43, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
Haha, This is a very funny article, I recommend this for VFH.
The concept is very good, I wasn't expecting it at all.
Prose and formatting:
Well written, all good so far.
I especially like the one with the cowboy, genius.
Because I still have no idea what this section means but averages at 10