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Advice, si vous plais. --  Le Cejak <-> 19:35, 29 September 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 7 some good chuckles, but nothing sparkling.
Concept: 7 good concept, although the title is a little misleading. it sounds like it might include accounts of actual machete battles.
Prose and formatting: 9.9 no faults here. maybe move an image to the left to make your article sexier.
Images: 7.5 love the monkey one, the other ones are acceptable. throw a caption on the gnome one.
Miscellaneous: 10 love the abandoned places part
Final Score: 41.4 a solid article worthy of both praise and betterment. i'd like to see some accounts of famous machete battles. maybe try for a slightly more encyclopeic tone, while keeping the veiled references to being terrorized in 'nam and the general macho tone also.
Reviewer: --SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 06:57, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
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