Please, only someone familiar with Walden review this.
Guildensternenstein 05:17, 2 February 2009 (UTC)
Although it's only at the peak of its humour if you are familiar with Walden, even without prior knowing, this article is quite funny.
The article works very well, the concept has been used before but I've not read any other similar article as funny as this one.
Prose and formatting:
Some grammar errors in this, I'd correct them but I'm too busy clearing this backlog of reviews.
Images work very well, the mushroom caption made me laugh my arse off.
A good article overall, it could do with improvements in the grammar department but that is all I'd change
Don't change the content, it works as well as I can see it working, not many people will be familiar with Walden which is why it has probably been here waiting for a review. My favourite part is in the first paragraphs when it refers back to the repetative narritive.
For the record most of those grammatical errors (like the run-on sentences) are intentional, as that's how Thoreau writes. It's really quite painful, actually. Thanks for the review, though! --Guildensternenstein 04:17, 25 February 2009 (UTC).
thats not the ones I was pointing out, I meant actualy grammatical errors.--Projectmayhem666Talk 07:43, 25 February 2009 (UTC)