Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Triple Barreled Shotgun
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Well, This is my first article, and I'd really appreciate some constructive criticism.
I plan to do additions/subtractions/multiplications/divisions on this article, So it's definately not at it's best, I'm kind of stumped as to what else to expand on. thanks in advance.
Gas Pump 01:41, 19 February 2008 (UTC)
|Humour:||7||Nice, I like the "shot in face three times" bit|
|Concept:||9||original, you could always go on to many barreled firearms|
|Prose and formatting:||8||a little short, but you do say you plan to do higher math|
|Images:||1||sorry, you need images|
|Miscellaneous:||4||I know its old, but russian reversal quotes I belive should be a must|
|Final Score:||29||Short, sweet but needs more images. could you review, princess leia for me?|
|Reviewer:||(Cadarado425 14:21, 19 February 2008 (UTC))|
Comment: I actually agree with most of this short review, except to say that Russian Reversals are really old news on this site, and have been done to death. So consider ignoring that part, but beyond that, this is a promising start, you seem to know what you're doing, so keep going and have fun with it! A bit of polish is required, and perhaps some expansion. Consider perhaps discussing advertising slogans for the weapon, celebrity endorsements, that kind of thing. Just an idea. --SirU.U.Esq. VFH | GUN | Natter | Uh oh | Pee 14:32, 19 February 2008 (UTC)