Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Transformers the Movie

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edit Transformers the Movie

I just want to see how this article flies, ya know what I'm saying? I put my heart and soul into this article and my friends seem to like, so I want to see how it works with others.

PsychotypeD 04:59, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 10 Damn this thing was long. If it weren't so funny I probably wouldn't have read been able to read it all the way through. Even then there were parts that seemed stretched too far. There is nothing really wrong with it. I think anyone who has seen the movie can read the whole thing without shooting themselves. You have many jokes throughout which are strong and really move the whole thing forward. It would be nice if you could thin up the characters section, because that thing is brutal to read.
Concept: 7 Generally movies aren't good concepts to make fun of. But this one is an exception, due to the fact of its topic. You really took this in the right direction like you normally do. You did make it a bit unreadable, meaning it was a little bit too long. That is my main concern. Shortening up would lose alot of the jokes, but it would strengthen it I think, because its just not a mass of text for everyone to read.
Prose and formatting: 6 This was my biggest problem. Everything fit perfectly, like the pictures and I think the spelling was alright for the most part. But if you skim through it, it is just a mass of text. This can be fixed by breaking everything into more readable paragraphs, or by cutting some things out. Cutting out would be bad, because alot of what you have in there is really funny. I do recommend cutting some of the character section out though, and keeping them brief so readers can look through them easier.
Images: 8 Alot of pictures. They were really good too. Some seemed a bit random, like the Ironhide one and the Megatron one, but they work I guess. You always seem to do a good job on the pictures and they always fit with whats going on.
Miscellaneous: 8 Averaged
Final Score: 39 Again, nice job on the humour. There were lots of laugh out loud parts. The only thing I could recommend is shortening it up. Otherwise, another awesome job. Good Luck!
Reviewer: --Yodel monkey 20:08, 13 December 2008 (UTC)
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