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Started this one a while ago, finished it just now. Review. --Littleboyonly TKFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK Oldmanonly 00:23, 7 February 2008 (UTC)

I place my (rather urine-soaked) towel on this deckchair, german-style. Wait, isn't it russians now? --User:Fag/sig2 10:39, 7 February 2008 (UTC)
As Fag is never going to get around to this (I checked on his talk page), I'm usurping his pissy towel with my mug o'tea and a commitment to review this very soon. --SirU.U.Esq. VFH | GUN | Natter | Uh oh | Pee 12:32, Feb 28
UUtea A big mug o' reviewin' strength tea? Why, that must mean this article
is being reviewed by:
UU - natter UU Manhole
(While you're welcome to review it as well, you might like to consider helping someone else instead).
(Also, if the review hasn't been finished within 24 hours of this tag appearing, feel free to remove it or clout UU athwart the ear'ole).
Humour: 9 I was smiling and giggling as I read this, which is always a good sign. You've taken what could have been a cheap joke, added some good ideas to it, and come out with a winner. The only thing I don't like about articles like this is the fact that they leave me little to suggest or critique, but I'll do my best with a comment or two below.
Concept: 8 On first glance at the title, this looks like something an IP would whip up in 30 seconds and lol over. But instead, you've used the comedy name as the basis for a good article, and crucially, while it forms the backbone, it's not the sole source of laughs.
Prose and formatting: 8 I don't need to say much about your formatting, the length is about right, there were a couple of minor spelling quibbles some nice person sorted out for you... Yeah, good.
Images: 8 The right number, and, while they don't bring any funny to the party of themselves, they are captioned well, which merits a good score.
Miscellaneous: 8.3 Averaged, Titshugger would have wanted it that way.
Final Score: 41.3 I like this. It's funny, well executed, and had me chuckling. Have a think about the comments below (there will be some soon, honest!), but other than that, you have a damn fine article here.
Reviewer: --SirU.U.Esq. VFH | GUN | Natter | Uh oh | Pee 15:28, Feb 28

Comments to follow, probably this evening.

It is now this evening. Therefore:

A question occurs - if there was an elder Titshugger, how did he come by the name? I mean, amusing as the section dealing with the name is, it felt like that was left hanging to me. It could be just me of course (it often is), but I'd like an idea of where the name may have originated from.

Actually, apart from that, I'm struggling. So unless you have any objections, this is heading for a nom in the near future. Not now though - I have an early start tomorrow so I'm off to bed. Nighty night! --SirU.U.Esq. VFH | GUN | Natter | Uh oh | Pee 22:53, Feb 28

No objections whatsoever. As to the elder Titshugger question, I could go and say that he was named after a Native American uncle of his, or something, but then I'd have to go and explain that. I think it's best to leave it as it is to prevent it from just getting sillier. Good night, sweet prince. --Littleboyonly TKFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK Oldmanonly 23:02, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
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