Original. Elaborate. Funny. Quotable. All around good concept in my book. Although i'm confused as to where the lay-zombies join? Perhaps there is an embassy or maybe even a recuitment office? Also, does the zombie nation take in those zombies of all infection origin?
Prose and formatting:
Excellent back story and unusual attention to detail. More separation between sections would be a plus.
Okay images. A table of zombie-government leadership would be helpful in finding the upper-echelon of glorious comrade leaders.
The list of honorary citizens intrigued me. But it seems that it would be hard to give a zombie post-death honor.
I quite enjoyed this article an i hope it gets the recognition it deserves. Before they find you, of course.