||As per the previous reviews, it's a bunch of homophobic jibes, random stuff ("ocnodecember 69", how amusing) and suchlike. Nothing approaching an original joke here, I'm afraid
||I really don't see the point of this article
|Prose and formatting:
||Some mistakes here and there, nothing horrendous, but some bits still need fixing
||Well, it has some, and work has gone into them. Fine enough I suppose
||Sorry, but this is not a good article. And please don't put it back up for review again without a lot of changes, 3 reviews all saying similar things ought to suggest something
||Honestly, I don't see the point of this article, but if you really think it's something Uncyc desperately needs, then get out your tin of elbow grease and put some serious work in. Ask good writers for help if you think you have ideas but can't get the best out of them, and remember to look through HTBFANJS - it often throws up a good idea even if you've read it before.
||--Sir Under User (Hi, How Are You?) VFH KUN 13:21, 14 September 2007 (UTC)