Completely revamped it. Not sure how funny it is though, since most of the humor is only obvious to those who has previously read the book. zheoliel 06:13 September 23
||Didn't really find it funny. Not my style of humour. Sorry.
||Great background info. I've never read the book (if it exists?).
|Prose and formatting:
||A few spelling mistakes but apart from that very detailed.
||Just improve the humour element and you'll be there. Sorry if it is funny to you.
||ScottPat (talk) 15:17, April 4, 2013 (UTC)