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This took me a long time to write, and I'm still kind of "meh" about it. Also, tl;dr. --Pleb SYNDROME CUN medicate (butt poop!!!!) 20:53, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 5 There are moments of promise, but it goes off into too many tangents, or base humor.
Concept: 7 I'll give you points for concept; it's an interesting angle.
Prose and formatting: 4 The prose isn't stand-out, and the formatting makes my eyes bleed. Do better.
Images: 4 The images, while of a decent quality, are pretty much irrelevant, especially the captions.
Miscellaneous: 3 Penis jokes? really?
Final Score: 23 The concept shows promise, but this article needs serious work; perhaps even an overhaul.
Reviewer: Sir Judgement F@H UmP VFH {talk}
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