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The Human Element

Parody of those stupid Cisco commercials... treating it as if it really were a legitimate chemical element.  Megalomaniac Martin “The Unfortunately Unfeatured” Ultima • (VOTE FOR ME!) • talk • (AND MY PICS TOO!) • contribs 02:18, 27 June 2007 (UTC)

Whoops, sorry, I meant Dow (all those stupid commercials look the same to me)  Megalomaniac Martin “The Unfortunately Unfeatured” Ultima • (VOTE FOR ME!) • talk • (AND MY PICS TOO!) • contribs 02:20, 27 June 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	6	Whilst a good, clever joke, it is a bit worn out, to say the very minimum. I mean, you took it off a commercial!
Concept:	6	Again, same applies for the concept: good, but old.
Prose and formatting:	8	A well structured, nice looking article. A bit on the small side.
Images:	7	There aren't very many, and the ones that are don't seem to add anything to this article.
Miscellaneous:	8	Well spelt article.
Final Score:	35	The article faces two problems, one solvable, one not quite so. The first is that it's a little on the thin side. It is quite a short article, the humour isn't developed to the full, so I suggest you go back and expand this. Secondly, and this is the killer, it is awe-inspiringly unoriginal. I would choose to vote for this article, and I would say that I wouldn't expect others to for this reason. However, if that doesn't bother you, then keep working at it, as it could eventually come to fruition.
Reviewer:	--The Rt. Hon. BarryC MUN (Symposium!) Sigh. Double Sigh. 22:36, 24 July 2007 (UTC)