this reads like a poorly executed mad-lib. i really can't go in-depth here, someone will probably delete this within 24 hours.
a pretty weird concept, without anything to back it up.
Prose and formatting:
ugh, poor spelling, grammar, formatting, etc.
no images. c'mon.
this isn't an acceptable article. if you're serious about writing here, first get a username. maybe you can convince some sexy admin to move it to userspace for an overhaul (try offering pie). otherwise, this one's gonna be gone really soon. if you want to improve your writing, read HTBFANJS over and over and over. don't go woth tired jokes like britney spears. this could be a decent article, but pretty much nothing in it is worth keeping.