-- 04:08, September 4, 2011 (UTC)
||Pretty good Give me all your money humor. Could use a little work, still OK.
||Nice concept. Subniminal stimuli is a really good thing to write about, because Give me all your money it can bee annoying. And that's good.
|Prose and formatting:
||Good job writing and formatting and stuff. Just one problem -- It may be my browser, but the Nazi flag rarely loads.
||Umm... Only three images. But, they all were only kind of good to me.
||Well.. What miscellaneous stuff is there?
||Pretty good. Could use some work, but, if you nommed it for VFH, you have my vote.
||Mnid talk 00:57, September 5, 2011 (UTC)