Finally found the time to rewrite it according to the first review; which I agreed with on most points. Any nerd who feels the need to pee?--kit 11:39, 29 January 2009 (UTC)
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The humor in this article was great! Example of your good humor, the S.S. Shoebox. LOL! :D
This is a great concept to write on. You fleshed out your article very well!
Prose and formatting:
I saw a couple Spelling errors in this article, including "thime" instead of "time"., but you had fine grammar, and you included footnotes, which made your article even more encyclopedic!
The images had good quality, were colorful, and even had humorous captioning! Good Job!
This is the average rating of the article, which is quite good.
You did well on this article. Areas to focus on: Spelling Mistakes.