Finally found the time to rewrite it according to the first review; which I agreed with on most points. Any nerd who feels the need to pee?--kit 11:39, 29 January 2009 (UTC)
||The humor in this article was great! Example of your good humor, the S.S. Shoebox. LOL! :D
||This is a great concept to write on. You fleshed out your article very well!
|Prose and formatting:
||I saw a couple Spelling errors in this article, including "thime" instead of "time"., but you had fine grammar, and you included footnotes, which made your article even more encyclopedic!
||The images had good quality, were colorful, and even had humorous captioning! Good Job!
||This is the average rating of the article, which is quite good.
||You did well on this article. Areas to focus on: Spelling Mistakes.
||Skate1168 21:31, 2 February 2009 (UTC)