Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Spawn (second try)

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edit Spawn

Ok, so I posted for this page Spawn to be reviewed to help me finish it. It's my first page on Uncyclopedia and I wanted to be sure I got this right.

Unfortunately, it got reviewed by somebody who had nothing better to do than say nonsense and put some stupid grade without explaining why or suggesting improvement. It short, my Pee Review got Vandalized. So I'm trying again. Please help! Collex 01:06, 15 February 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 6.5 First thing to say, Collex, is I'm sorry. the article, though, really wasnt that funny. the beggining was, but it wore off over time.
Concept: 8.5 The idea of using a comic book character was very original. Very good here.
Prose and formatting: 10 Excellently formatted, no mistakes.
Images: 3 pretty crappy...
Miscellaneous: 5 i was wondering if youd review my article "bubblegum pop" and be HONEST!
Final Score: 33 the article was more useful than funny, i would reccomend a rewrite of the last couple sections.
Reviewer: Bitchass441 02:23, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
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