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--Danny7147 (talk) 20:04, January 7, 2015 (UTC)
A few spelling grammar mistakes... nothing terrible!
  1. ...where it could "deal with" with the... you've got the word 'with' twice in a row
  2. Native Americans shouldn't have brackets around it
  3. Section two, a couple of commas needed here and there... " Johnny's archenemy a Santee Native American" needs to be "archenemy, a Santee"
  4. " with brand new horseless carriage" needs either 'a' or 'the'... "with a brand new horseless carriage" for example...
  5. Medical University of South Carolina link (near the bottom of section 2) doesn't work as the page doesn't exist. That's why it's in red...
Nothing major, good story!
This was a Pee Review by --Danny7147 (talk) 20:04, January 7, 2015 (UTC)



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