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Vavaunni--Vavaunni (talk) 06:26, December 26, 2014 (UTC)
The humor, sadly, is not that great. Reading it is akin to reading the wikipedia article..... No, not the facts, but

It just seems to drone on and on for ever. The humor is everywhere, but I didnt laugh.

The humor needs a LOT of improvement. Namely, it needs to make people laugh. Humor is subjective, but repeated comments about drugs and sex loses its charm after some time.

The article is formatted in top notch manner. The grammar is mostly correct and the words used apt.

The utilisation of images has been done well.

Im not saying that this article is no laughs. The first part especially is rib-tickling. However, the humor seriously needs to be improved upon
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