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Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 19:25, Jun 22

Humour: 4 The humor here is kind of bland. It's funny if you really look at it hard....but, nothing is funny if you have to break it down and think about it.

Advice: Make humor more drunken-stupid/slapstick hit-you-in-da-face humor. In other words, make funny one-liners about drug comparisons to Soma and disperse them throughout the article.

Concept: 8 The concept is great. It involves a homemade recipe for Soma, something that will make you hallucinate and, for obvious reasons, will make you "ready", for...well, you know what. The fact that the author provides his own recipe for Soma is the best part of the concept.

Advice: It's actually darn good, no real advice. All of the scores will go up with improvement to humor above.

Prose and formatting: 5 The pcitures need to be placed better, and need to be bigger. Remember, bigger is better.


Images: Um, 7. They're good, but match them correctly with the words on the page.

Advice: N/A

Miscellaneous: 4 A4 um, "4" effort!
Final Score: 27 Ok overall, fix the humor stuff and it will score higher. Edit it, and I'll re-PR it.
Reviewer: A (Ruins) 22:54, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
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