Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/So you thought that using the Euro as currency would be all fun and games?
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Second review. Had a good review from Sycamore, did some changes, got some help from Modus, and looking for any additional issues. The format is still a bit funky, due to the rumbling nature of the narrator. Thanks.21:05, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
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- Okay, Mordillo, I'll review your European article, but don't expect me to "get" it. • <0:25, 26 Jul 2008>
|Humour:||6.2||blaaah blah blah
|Concept:||6||Here's what's annoying about this: the title, mostly. "All fun and games" suggests that the article would contrast the GOOD parts of whatever you're talking about (Euros in this case?) drastically with the BAD parts. As far as I can tell, you only really talked about the "bad" of using the Euro, and I didn't really understand what you were talking about. You need to go overboard is what I'm saying, but I don't see how you can.
First of all, are you trying to convince us to use Euros? Okay, contrast it with the other types of currency more. I notice you did a sentence in there about the other currency types, but that's not enough. Second, is this in a business format, like, from the perspective of a business? Maybe that's why I got so lost. There's some mingling of "artists" in there that I didn't understand. Is the business paying for art with Euros? I'm lost with the concept. TO REITERATE: You need to have a heavier contrast between what's good and bad about Euros.
|Prose and formatting:||9||Looks above average, but it's not very hi-brow prose, compared with other things I've seen. I guess I reserve 10's for hi-falutent wordy words.|
|Images:||8||I never know how to score images.|
|Final Score:||36.5||I guess I'm not the best person to review this, seeing as how I know jack about the Euro, but I guess it's good to get other points of view. I try to not be too American in my articles, too, but I can't help it. Mordillo, thanks for asking me to review this! It's been such a long time. If you fix up the article and want me to look at it again, just call me up. Keep on truckin'!|
|Reviewer:||• <0:25, 26 Jul 2008>|