Here's a new one I'm working on. Just looking for some input. -- Spillin Dylan TALK EDITS 02:21, April 30 2008
||This is a pretty funny article, with something to laugh at almost everywhere. It needs a little more content, and you could talk about Russia needing snowmobiles, but its a pretty funny article.
||An article about a snowmobile, and the usage in Canada and stuff, its got a good concept. once again, you could have talked about more uses.
|Prose and formatting:
||Formatted pretty well. a bit of a jumble toward the bottom. Otherwise, It was formatted pretty well.
||Theres only 2 images. However, they both have a pretty funny comment, so Im giving a 6.
||Overall, a pretty good article. You REALLY should have a few quotes, like:
“They are used in very cold places!”"
or something like that. Talk more about other countries use.
||A pretty funny article. i know you said you're still working on it, so i want you let me know when its finished :)
||~ NEZLR 15:12, 1 May 2008 (UTC)