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Here's a new one I'm working on. Just looking for some input. -- SmallbeerSpillin DylanSmallbeerTALKSmallbeerEDITSSmallbeer202:21, April 30 2008

Humour: 8 This is a pretty funny article, with something to laugh at almost everywhere. It needs a little more content, and you could talk about Russia needing snowmobiles, but its a pretty funny article.
Concept: 7 An article about a snowmobile, and the usage in Canada and stuff, its got a good concept. once again, you could have talked about more uses.
Prose and formatting: 7.5 Formatted pretty well. a bit of a jumble toward the bottom. Otherwise, It was formatted pretty well.
Images: 6 Theres only 2 images. However, they both have a pretty funny comment, so Im giving a 6.
Miscellaneous: 7 Overall, a pretty good article. You REALLY should have a few quotes, like: "
“They are used in very cold places!”
~ Captain Obvious on snowmobiles

or something like that. Talk more about other countries use.

Final Score: 35.5 A pretty funny article. i know you said you're still working on it, so i want you let me know when its finished :)
Reviewer: ~ NEZLR Dancingmilk Th stupidMewhenreadingstupidstuff Seizure Donuts 15:12, 1 May 2008 (UTC)
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