This seems about ready. If anyone takes this, I hope you enjoy it. Some autobiographical stuff in there, in fact it's all true! Well, some. Thanks for glancing at it and/or more. Aleister 12:10 14 1 '11
Humour:
10
Great story!! I loved it. I can see you put your back into making this article funny and humorous for everyone. I know everyone will love reading this article.
Concept:
10
Were you trying to make a story for UnBooks? This is a great story for UnBooks also. That was just a suggestion.
Prose and formatting:
10
Everything looks perfect.
Images:
10
The images fit in right with the story.
Miscellaneous:
10
10's make the sections go green!!
Final Score:
50
Best story-telling article ever!! As I said before, this is a great story for UnBooks also.
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