It's not about slime, and it's not a sport, so don't worry. -- • <-> 02:59, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
||It was funny, but a bit of a regurgitated joke. however we can all relate.
||As I said before, it is a good concept as we can all relate
|Prose and formatting:
||need more "stuff"
||Pictures fitted the article well
||Didnt quite have the "x" factor, however it was a good concept
||Quite a good article, however try and put some more jokes in there. I can see that it is just a "one sided" conversation. So possibly some jokes with threats. 31/50 (Did I add that up right?)