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Humour: 7.5 I like this. The humour is more gentle than in-your-face, but I found myself smiling throughout.
Concept: 8 Again, I like the concept. It seems like a logical extension.
Prose and formatting: 8 Quite well written, no problems with the formatting, maybe needs a little polish on one or two sentences for readability.
Images: 7 Relevant images, but maybe the first two rely a little too much on familiarity with the games. Maybe move the final pic up a bit unless you expand the article more - it gets lost in its own white space at the bottom otherwise.
Miscellaneous: 8 A good expansion from the ICU tag. I think that can safely be removed now.
Final Score: 38.5 A decent article. Kudos! I have no idea how this would fare on VFH, but not every article has to go on there. This is a very good addition to Uncyc.
Reviewer: --Sir Under User (Hi, How Are You?) VFH KUN 09:43, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

My usual bit: this is only my opinion, others are available. --Sir Under User (Hi, How Are You?) VFH KUN 09:43, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

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