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edit Shopping list (2nd submit)

OK, after very helpful comments from Ljlego in the first review (see talk page), I've done a bit more work on this. Opinions, anyone?

Humour: 9.5 Yes, 9.5. I laughed the entire way.
Concept: 10 One of the most original concepts I've seen on this site.
Prose and formatting: 9 Beautiful flowing language that keeps me going with nary an awkward pause.
Images: 8 I laughed a good deal, but the captions are carrying the images. I don't know how you'll improve this one, but great job nonetheless.
Miscellaneous: 10 This article absolutely deserves to go on VFH. In fact, I'm going there now.
Final Score: 46.5 Thanks for your toaster review, and remember, this was an absolutely honest reivew.
Reviewer: Necropaxx (T) {~} 18:48, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
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