OK, after very helpful comments from Ljlego in the first review (see talk page), I've done a bit more work on this. Opinions, anyone?
| Humour:
| 9.5
| Yes, 9.5. I laughed the entire way.
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| Concept:
| 10
| One of the most original concepts I've seen on this site.
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| Prose and formatting:
| 9
| Beautiful flowing language that keeps me going with nary an awkward pause.
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| Images:
| 8
| I laughed a good deal, but the captions are carrying the images. I don't know how you'll improve this one, but great job nonetheless.
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| Miscellaneous:
| 10
| This article absolutely deserves to go on VFH. In fact, I'm going there now.
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| Final Score:
| 46.5
| Thanks for your toaster review, and remember, this was an absolutely honest reivew.
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| Reviewer:
| • • • Necropaxx (T) {~} 18:48, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
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