Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Shamwow (quick) (absorbant)

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edit Shamwow

I know it isn't finished, but that's why I'm here. I just noticed that TERRIBLE Billy hayes article got the front page, and my product and spokesmen is much newer than Oxyclean. So the concept must be decent at least. I need approval for the bullshit I've already put in the article and would like someone else to add additional bullshit if they so see fit. Thx 18:02, 22 January 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 8 There were quite a few good jokes, but some were a bit immature.
Concept: 9 I'm glad someone made an article about this- it's a great idea.
Prose and formatting: 8 Good writing, sentences are mostly good. SOme errors that I probably didn't notice.
Images: 7 Good pictures, but the Nazi one is too much.
Miscellaneous: 8 Needs a little less Nazi content, more biblical content.
Final Score: 40 Good article, needs to mature a bit.
Reviewer: erock199
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