Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Scrub typhus: the geographic distribution of phenotypic and genotypic variants of Orientia tsutsugamushi

I could use some feedback on this article, I think. pillow talk 18:06, 27 March 2009 (UTC)

Too many long words and makes the article look boring. Try to shorten the article too and use more jokes. Teh Thunderboi - Join Everquest! ( Talkpage • Sign • Contributions ) 13:12, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

Absolutely hilarious, I laughed the whole way through. Definitely nominated. Gas Pump 14:10, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

Humour:	$\sum_{n=1}^{\infty}\frac{1}{2^n}$	Not bad. Could be funnier. If only there were some sort of project where you could list your article and get meaningful feedback. That might help you. A LOT.
Concept:	$f = \lim_{n \to \infty} \frac{1}{n} \sin(n^2 x)$	You really shouldn't attack hard-working scientists. Can you imagine how hard it must be for DJ Kelley, working two jobs just to put food on her family?
Prose and formatting:	4	Needs more line breaks.
Images:	$\frac{df}{dx}$	So beautiful, closing the window brought a tear to my eye. The had kid has kind of a creepy stare, though.
Miscellaneous:	9	My favorite part was that one section with the stuff. I loved that. Write that part again.
Final Score:	13	A++++++ WOULD READ AGAIN. SHIPPING WAS SPEEDY
Reviewer:	--C:\syndrome\_ 03:45, 27 April 2009 (UTC)Good job