# Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Scrub typhus: the geographic distribution of phenotypic and genotypic variants of Orientia tsutsugamushi

### editScrub typhus: the geographic distribution of phenotypic and genotypic variants of Orientia tsutsugamushi

I could use some feedback on this article, I think. 18:06, 27 March 2009 (UTC)

Too many long words and makes the article look boring. Try to shorten the article too and use more jokes. Teh ( TalkpageSignContributions ) 13:12, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

Absolutely hilarious, I laughed the whole way through. Definitely nominated. Gas Pump 14:10, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

 Humour: $\sum_{n=1}^{\infty}\frac{1}{2^n}$ Not bad. Could be funnier. If only there were some sort of project where you could list your article and get meaningful feedback. That might help you. A LOT. Concept: $f = \lim_{n \to \infty} \frac{1}{n} \sin(n^2 x)$ You really shouldn't attack hard-working scientists. Can you imagine how hard it must be for DJ Kelley, working two jobs just to put food on her family? Prose and formatting: 4 Needs more line breaks. Images: $\frac{df}{dx}$ So beautiful, closing the window brought a tear to my eye. The had kid has kind of a creepy stare, though. Miscellaneous: 9 My favorite part was that one section with the stuff. I loved that. Write that part again. Final Score: 13 A++++++ WOULD READ AGAIN. SHIPPING WAS SPEEDY Reviewer: -- 03:45, 27 April 2009 (UTC)Good job