Hello, another re-write (no, I don't know if I'll ever actually start an article of my own, leave me alone!)
Anyways, I have a suspicion that this could go a lot further, but I wanted to avoid falling into the trap of a long list of pointless military things (which would be so easy to produce). Any suggestions? Or is it OK as it is? --SirUnder User(Hi,HowAreYou?)VFHKUN 12:34, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
after reading the title, i deemed this article to have huge lame potential, but it provided me with chuckle after chuckle
an excellent concept for an uncyc article
Prose and formatting:
as anyone who's ever had an article reviewed by me knows, i love links. a lot. maybe sprinkle some more in.
the two are good, but given the length i think one more would be appropriate. i offer an image i made a while ago that might fit in nicely.
marching in a cube...hehehe
your fears were unfounded, sir. i find your list to be funny rather than annoying, as it is relatively short and quite good. it currently stands as a solid (fuck, there's that word again) rewrite. should you ever feel the need to expand it, maybe sections on specifics could be added, like most pointless technology or best military use of sea otter.