Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Rocky Mountains
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|Humour:||6.5||avg of all sections
I gave you an above average score because it's funny in spite of it's randomness. Notice the "in spite of" part? I thought you would. It introduces the topic like it should plus it got me to giggle. However, I'm a giggler.
Weird little introduction that flew over my head. The randomness has gotten in the way of the funny, I guess.
Ooooh, I get it. The ROCKy mountains. God I'm stupid. Okay, anyway, it's acceptable now that I get the joke.
That was very random, sir! I... I don't know what to say...
Well, I'm glad I don't know who Def Leppard is, then. This section should probably just go, if you asked for MY opinion on the matter.
Yes, way above average. Yes.
Good idea talking about classical music in all of this. But that section in itself was technically good, but just boring, that's all.
It's a nearly acceptable ending. Obviously, it's a work in progress but that's not going to make me more lenient. I'm a hard ass.
|Concept:||8||The fact that I didn't see that the article was about rock muzak makes it clear that the idea is above the norm. Why? I'm not sure. I guess it means that I didn't think of it, which means that it must be clever (see? see the logic?)|
|Prose and formatting:||7||Obviously, it's sections are a little on the short side. However, you write pretty damn well, I'd say.|
|Images:||6||The one picture you have is cool, but could you add one more of just mountains with a funny little caption at the bottom? That'd be great thanks.|
|Miscellaneous:||6.9||avg of your other scores|
|Final Score:||34.4||Uh, okay, expansion? I'm not sure. Obviously you could talk about famous musicians (and say more than that they suck, please) and famous genres of music. In fact, don't just stick with rock: go crazy. Uh, did I help at all?|
|Reviewer:||• <-> Nov 27, 14:19|