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yep Littleboyonly TKFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK Oldmanonly 18:22, August 20, 2012 (UTC)

Humour: 10 I love it! The article has a somewhat serious tone, which I like, but also contains what seems to be the personal rants of a person afflicted by frequent kidney stones. I also like the links to other great pages of semi-relevance as readers mightprobably won't come across those on their own.
Concept: 10 A fairly (un)informative article about rocks if I do say so myself. My only concern is that it may not talk enough about actual rocks... although I can't think of anything offhand to add. Have you by chance been put through the hell that is a kidney stone??
Prose and formatting: 10 Everything seems to be in order: no spelling or grammar issues.
Images: 10 Just the right number of pictures for an article this size. I like the entirely unfunny pictures themselves with their respective captions, being obvious or in respect to the running thread. BTW if that last one IS a kidney stone, then I would have to agree with you.
Miscellaneous: 11 For an all around awesome article that should be put on VFH.
Final Score: 51 Thanks for the fantastic article and the laughs that came with it. I know I really didn't give many tips for improvement, but that is because it doesn't need it...in my 'expert' opinion that is.
Reviewer: Grammarnazilogo Fe+3 AlFe+2 05:26, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
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