Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Robitussin (rewrite)

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edit Robitussin

Guildensternenstein 06:06, 7 February 2009 (UTC)

I rewrote this a while back, but I don't know if anyone/everyone knew, hence this.

--Guildensternenstein 06:06, 7 February 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 4 You've taken something unfunny and tried to make it funny but its really nor worked out, I know it says be funny not just stupid, but you can be a little stupid, a little bit immaturity might help this article.
Concept: 4 This has already been done, multiple times, see calpol
Prose and formatting: 6 The language part of this is ok but all you have in respect is added some falsities to the article.
Images: 4 Your images are only relying on captions, given the content of the article, you could do with some photoshop, even paint.
Miscellaneous: 4 The idea is good, but it has been done before, its not greatly funny, it does however have potential, I hope you review this again after improvements.
Final Score: 22 Keep up the good work, a tip for being funny, write what would make you laugh.
Reviewer: --Projectmayhem666 Talk 22:45, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
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