I was laughing at the stupidity of this while I was writing it which took all of 30 minutes. What advice do you have for it? -- • <-> 04:20, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
||I laughed out loud!
||Something that could've been so horrible and predictable really picked up and made it hilarious!
|Prose and formatting:
||Keep ti this way though I do think I may have found a spelling mistake somewhere.
||Pretty much perfect especially the exploding car.
||my fmaily says I beat them less....
||This is so funny I laughed really hard reading this in my university's library everyone was looking at me but it was totally worth it!
||--Dr. Fenwick 00:34, 13 October 2007 (UTC)