It's black in its humor, but it is a rather dark subject anyway. Any comments on length? What to add? Phrank Psinatra 18:53, August 30, 2011 (UTC)
Humour:
7
It does seem pretty humorous, but it also seems sad. Just because it's a dark subject doesn't mean you has to be a gloomy article...perhaps you could try something different?
Concept:
10
I enjoy the concept, and I find it very original. I can say that much.
Prose and formatting:
3
Most of the articles I've seen don't look like this, it resembles a list...I think you should probably make it look more other Uncyclopedia articles. Also I don't remember seeing any links, wouldn't want to trap somebody, now would you?
Images:
0
For the simple reason that there are not images in the article. If it helps any, I added some for you.
Miscellaneous:
7
How I feel about the article.
Final Score:
27
So far so good! Pay attention to my suggestions and keep working on it!
This article is by now hopefully fixed, and I have followed as many things as I could. Lightening it up was difficult, due to the subject matter. Too bad Ilovecheeseandsausage no longer appears to exist or I would thank him for his assistance.
