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I made another article that was huffed! DAP Dame Pleb Com. Miley Spears (talk) 21:41, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

This one's mine. 5-6 hours--Grue JammyDirectorEye 4WILLExplode 3YOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 00:00, March 25, 2010 (UTC)
I'm half way finished with it, but got come up with something in real life and don't have the time to finish it tonight (Its around my bed time.) I get to the rest of the review as soon as I'm done with school. Sorry for delaying, but I'm not good at reviewing when I'm tired.--
I can't finish the review do to the fact I'm still suffering from illness, so this review is open to anyone. I may finish it in the fututre, but I'm not promising anything--Grue JammyDirectorEye 4WILLExplode 3YOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 01:29, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Grue JammyDirectorEye 4WILLExplode 3YOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 02:19, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Humour: 7 Some bits are funny, some seem more relevant to teenagers, not preteens.
Concept: 8 Good concept, preteens are a common species and people need to know about them.
Prose and formatting: 9 Spelling and grammar was all correct, I'm pretty sure. Looks encyclopediary.
Images: 9 Very nice, could be more.
Miscellaneous: 7 Perhaps a bit more hidden truth in the humour, yeah?
Final Score: 40 Overall, a fairly nice article. Not too long and not too short. Good images, could be funnier.
Reviewer: PigeonOfTheAppil 17:21, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
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