My second attempt at an Article. I can honestly say, I think it came out just a little better than my 1st one.
SWJS 22:02, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
||It's all too random. There are wayyyyy too many quotes. And article needn't rely on Oscar Wilde or any quotes to be good. If it needs quotes to be funny, that's the first sign of a weak article.
||WTF? This is so random. And if it's an inside joke I apologize for being stupid and Canadian.
|Prose and formatting:
||Nicely done, sir. (or Ma'am) Just a few typos.
||The one at the beginning is horribly edited, as are most of them.
||PLEASE GET RID OF THE GRATUITOUS TEMPLATES. It is a pet peeve of mine. Also you should make it shorter.
||I personally dislike it, but I guess you can clean it up a huge deal and then come talk to me.
||HNT♥♥ Look at this|Look at that |now it's time to sit & chat 01:11, 23 May 2008 (UTC)