A little something I wrote with Staircase a LONG while back. Just checking to see what people think! Thanks in advance! Please in-depth. Tagstit talk contribs awards 18:09, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
While not outstanding in humor, I did laugh several times while reading this article. I can imagine that this particular topic didn't jump out as a nesting ground for chuckles and laughs, and from what I can tell, you really did your best to work any jokes that could be made from it.
As I said above, the jokes probably didn't just write themselves when you were making this article. I'm giving you an eight for both taking on this challenge and for making a pretty decent piece of work out of it.
Prose and formatting:
Very professional writing. It looked a lot like a genuine encyclopedia article. There were a couple of spots where improvement could be made, but well done overall.
The images were where this article really shines. They were well-picked and positioned in the right places, and really supported the text. No further work is needed here.
Although I like your style of writing and the fact that you made jokes relevant to the topic, I felt that you wer a bit too serious in some spots. Remember, this isn't Conservapedia we're dealing with.
A quality article overall. Could use some improvement, but I liked it.