PieSoup 06:36, 13 September 2008 (UTC)
||The humor should support the concept more but not be completely dependent upon it. The existence of ROMS isn't funny in this context though it does help the coherence of the article.
||The concept is very good.
|Prose and formatting:
||I would suggest to do a bit of proofreading. Some of the sentences have spelling and grammar errors.
||I found the flashing image distracting. The other images look good.
||This is the first pee review I've done. Ever. So I'm giving you some benefit of the doubt.
||32 final score. Mostly I would suggest to work on the humor aspect, plus fix the flashing image so it doesnt distract from the article so much.
||-- Simsilikesims(♀UN) Talk here. 03:12, 14 September 2008 (UTC)