This article really sucked before, so I rewrote it. Now it only marginally sucks. I could use an opinion, so I can ignore it. Thanks! --THE 20:58, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
Humour:
8
I chuckled silently to myself a few times. It's a very subtle, satirical humor, which is nice. I don't expect anyone to actually laugh at this one.
Concept:
8
"I only buy this magazine for the articles." I'm not sure if you were aiming for that joke, but it seems like it. Well done. I think it needs more jokes about how the philosophical issues involved are not appropriate for children under 18.
Prose and formatting:
9
Elegant, in a way similar to the prose in the magazine.
Images:
6
Needs more in this area.
Miscellaneous:
7.8
The images/text ratio is a little heavy on the text size. There should at least be an image at the top to open up the article.
Final Score:
38.8
Good concept, subtle humor, needs some work on the images.