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They got Elias! --  Le Cejak <-> 18:38, 29 October 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 5 Ok, this is only the second Pee review of this N00b, so my apologies if I'm pissing in the wrong places, I promise to wipe the seat afterwards... Although its got a few interesting ideas for me it's a little bit thin on general gags although the concept itself is rather good. Perhaps you could add a reference to something about previous Tom hanks or Meg Ryan films such as "Castaway in Philadelphia" or "Big Sleepless in Seattle, "When harry met The Terminal?", Check out the list of films he has done and see what you fancy... I think you could also get away with a "see also" section with a list of other films which have tittles along similar lines?
Concept: 7 A good idea. I like the idea of mixing the two films, and think there is a lot of potential here.
Prose and formatting: 6 Not too many problems with the prose but I propose that you have a look at the formatting layout. On my screen (1024*768) the contents page appears in the middle of the screen (to the right of the picture) which does not look quite right to me. Your not quite consistant with you witting style, but I guess that's part of the idea.
Images: 6 Some good pics here. Liked the one at the top a lot. The "non" Hanks picture is quite good, but if it were me I might have used Sly from "Rambo" for this one, but that's obviously up to you... I think it would also benefit from another pic near the bottom of the article as it looks a bit dull down there.
Miscellaneous: 6 (Averaged from about)
Final Score: 30 Generally I think this has the potential to be quite good, but It defiantly needs a bit more humour to spice things up a bit and perhaps another picture of two.
Reviewer: MrN  Icons-flag-gb HalIcon.png WhoreMrn.png Fork you! 11:49, 25 November 2007 (UTC)
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