Dude. You mis-pronounced Pittsborough. IronLung 08:11, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
If you don't mind someone reviewing the article who knows almost nothing about the subject, I can do it. I'll assume you do not want a penguin ignoramus reviewing this unless I hear otherwise (in other words, I'll only review it if you say yes). WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 01:05, December 23, 2009 (UTC)
Bad, not enough funny. Few short sections few sentences. And jokes about Crosby, Crosby, Crosby... You even forgot to compare him to Ovetchkin. I'm hockey fan and I do not approve this article. Oscar Wilde coach? Garry Bettman too? Oh yeah.... that... c'mon, it's just crap, it's just, tho I smiled at "Lemieux saving his energy" but I found myself confused seeing him being put in 50's caption. It doesn't make both sense and fun. Absolutely to rewrite. Or delete and write again. Crap, crap, crap.
Uhm... Writing some random sentences full of Crosby and Lemiuex and Oscar Wilde. That's crap, as above. No concept here. Just random "fan or hater of Penguins (actually I can't see who you are)."
Prose and formatting:
This is not prose or formating but just irritating to read gobbledygook of, as we call it in Poland, Neo's kid - kid aged 8-13 that is trolling 10 h per day on the forums, wikis and MMORPGS. But maybe it's acceptable according to the level of SOME hockey fans
No images, no score
Is there anything more to add than this average score
And it seems that 42 is NOT THE ANSWER for everything.