Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Pittsburg Penguins

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edit Pittsburg Penguins

Hey may people add on to this? Hockeynut887 03:41, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Dude, you misspelled Pittsburgh. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 03:19, December 7, 2009 (UTC)
Dude. You mis-pronounced Pittsborough. IronLung 08:11, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
If you don't mind someone reviewing the article who knows almost nothing about the subject, I can do it. I'll assume you do not want a penguin ignoramus reviewing this unless I hear otherwise (in other words, I'll only review it if you say yes). WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 01:05, December 23, 2009 (UTC)
Humour: 1 Bad, not enough funny. Few short sections few sentences. And jokes about Crosby, Crosby, Crosby... You even forgot to compare him to Ovetchkin. I'm hockey fan and I do not approve this article. Oscar Wilde coach? Garry Bettman too? Oh yeah.... that... c'mon, it's just crap, it's just, tho I smiled at "Lemieux saving his energy" but I found myself confused seeing him being put in 50's caption. It doesn't make both sense and fun. Absolutely to rewrite. Or delete and write again. Crap, crap, crap.
Concept: 1 Uhm... Writing some random sentences full of Crosby and Lemiuex and Oscar Wilde. That's crap, as above. No concept here. Just random "fan or hater of Penguins (actually I can't see who you are)."
Prose and formatting: 2 This is not prose or formating but just irritating to read gobbledygook of, as we call it in Poland, Neo's kid - kid aged 8-13 that is trolling 10 h per day on the forums, wikis and MMORPGS. But maybe it's acceptable according to the level of SOME hockey fans
Images: 0 No images, no score
Miscellaneous: 1 Is there anything more to add than this average score
Final Score: 5 And it seems that 42 is NOT THE ANSWER for everything.
Reviewer: PoliszSir Ptok-BentonicznyPisz tutaj KUN 17:35, December 24, 2009 (UTC) Don't insult any hockey team by writing such a crap.
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