Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Pickelhaube
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[edit] Pickelhaube
I have completed yet another rewrite, and I was wondering what the community thinks of it. -- 23:00, 24 June 2007 (UTC)
| Humo(u)r: | 7 | Good jokes about the absurdity of the spike helmet, but not enough about the fates of soldiers who had to fight with this relatively useless weapon/helmet. What were they supposed to do, bend down and charge the enemy? |
| Concept: | 9 | Good choice of a silly piece of military history for parody. |
| Prose and Formatting: | 10 | Good formatting and prose. |
| Images: | 10 | Good pictures |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | This was funny, but could have been funnier if more descriptions of soldiers trying to fight in these spike helmets, perhaps some quotations from the soldiers about how useless the "weapon" was. |
| Final Score: | 43 | Funny but could be funnier. |
| Reviewer: | --Hrodulf 21:50, 30 June 2007 (UTC) | |
But I don't need any more pee.
13:09, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
