Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Organic chemistry

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edit Organic chemistry

My first article. Just looking for ways to improve it, or things that suck that I missed.

Grayscale 03:18, 8 February 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 7 It was pretty funny in some parts. It bogged down in the history section though. Nomenclature was pretty good
Concept: 9 It was original, but the failure concept played too large of a role.
Prose and formatting: 7 Too many ideas floating around. (You encased many of them.) Convert them into references, such as the one you have at the bottom.
Images: 10 It's enough
Miscellaneous: 10 Good length, right amount of links
Final Score: 43 Very good for a first attempt. You avoided many of the problems first time writers make, and it was funny in some areas. Use references to clean up idea spills, and take some out if they make the joke too obvious (such as 'getting confused yet?'), or if they don't add anything to the concept.
Reviewer: Fresh Stain Serq Fet of Pokemon (At your service) 19:31, 12 February 2008 (UTC)
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