Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Normandy

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edit Normandy

Anton (talk) 08:51, May 7, 2013 (UTC)

Humour: 8 I liked the humour personally but others may not understand it all. The cuisine is great and the fact that France doesn't want Normandy to become independent. To improve you could try repeating the Normandy independence joke more and making up a Norman terrorist group. It gets at the French which is what us Brits like to see. the Joan of Arc joke is funny.
Concept: 7 Brilliant in terms of what is there. it is funny and you know your stuff but there isn't enough of it. I want to laugh more about Normandy. I think you have explored the French dislike of Normandy well and the Normans crave for independence however I think more about Normandy and England is needed. More on D-Day perhaps as well. remember how much we wrote on the Ukraine article.
Prose and formatting: 8 Quite a few grammar mistakes still. get it proofread by User:Reverend P. Pennyfeather but nicely laid out. I like how it looks encyclopedic. good use of infobox for country.
Images: 9 Amazing images. Some of the best I've ever seen. Top quality. The alien one is very funny. You are very good with selecting the right images Anton.
Miscellaneous: 8.3 Average Score
Final Score: 40.3 Great work for a first article. If you added more to it perhaps it could be good enough for a feature. More jokes about the Norman culture and people required though.
Reviewer: Sir ScottPat (talk) White Ensign Scotland Flag 1 Compassrose VFH UnS NotM WotM WotY 15:59, May 8, 2013 (UTC)
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