Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Norelco (resubmit)

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Cleaned up and resubmitted. Removed most of the {{c}} tags, and added two new images. Ninjastar-no Megalomaniac Martin “The Unfortunately Unfeatured” Ultima(VOTE FOR ME!)talk(AND MY PICS TOO!)contribs 17:25, 3 July 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 6 Not bad, but not hilarious either. More jokes would help.
Concept: 6 I tend to enjoy company related articles more when they are constructed around a basic, funny, satirical idea. This is lacking in satire.
Prose and formatting: 5 Linking to actual articles in the style you have done can be funny. However, in this they are all redlinks, and that is just ugly.
Images: 9 The images are undoubtedly the best part of this article. Good stuff.
Miscellaneous: 7 Generally just lacking anything special, and there are still a few issues that should be fixed, as I have mentioned above.
Final Score: 33 I doubt that this has a chance on VFH at the moment. You should at least fix the redlinks first.
Reviewer: Icons-flag-au Sir Cs1987 UOTM. t. c 02:19, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
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