Rolando8 14:16, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
||The humor became stale after a few paragraphs, a little bit of HTBFANJS reviewing could take this farther. The material only randomly switches, nothing silly or ridiculous happens.
||I'm a big fan of "Articles written in the style of their subject" but as I said before, it could be so much more.
|Prose and formatting:
||No big problems, some of your math is way off but then again it is nonsense
||The images and captions were great. The platypus is probably my favorite.
||It's kinda funny but the joke dies before the article ends. If you could compact it a wee bit it might work better.
||--Ninja Kow 18:59, 13 March 2008 (UTC)