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edit Next Year's Australian Grand Prix

Basically Wacky Races. Much too long, I know, but if I'd missed anyone out someone would moan. Sog1970 15:16, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 6.5 I like this article. It just stops itself from being average, and leads itself up a couple of notches. I think it's pretty good in most places. I'm not sure if everyone would read it through to the end - but still good nonetheless
Concept: 6 Not quite tying your concept in with the rest of the article. But still, nice enough.
Prose and formatting: 5.6 I noticed a couple of spelling mistakes. Also, maybe consider breaking it up into more sections, and adding some sort of template to the side. A template with details. I'm not sure how to describe it: The one on the monty python article, but make it work for this one.
Images: 5.1 They were adequate for the most part. You get the .1 for the picture of the real car.
Miscellaneous: 5.7 So overall, this article is pretty good! But not, sometimes? I think the only real advice I can give is on the length, but I see no way of trimming it down.
Final Score: 28.9 This has been pee review. Good night.
Reviewer: Reverse Genocide Cockatrices 03:34, December 5, 2009 (UTC)
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