Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Ne-Yo (quick)

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edit Ne-Yo

Megaman2000 11:52, 30 December 2008 (UTC)

And I come from the pissless and dead to piss once more.

I, Methamphetamine, am here to pee on your article. If you can, please let me pee. Thank you, and good night.
Humour: 1 I believe there was only one part the made me laugh was the image of a car burning in "Reckless Driving". The rest were good jokes that would have been great if not delivered badly, and some of it is just flat-out unfunny, including the part where you mixed actual movie names mixed with what black people may be called. Some may say that that's racism. Try reading HTBFANJS, and check it twice. It separates the good writers from the bad.
Concept: 5 (Same way as Gerry)

3/5 points for actual concept. Everyone knows Ne-Yo is a bad rapper, so you could have chosen something less obvious.

2/5 points for execution. Once again, everyone knows Ne-Yo is a bad rapper, and you include that he sucks in almost every statement.

Prose and formatting: 5 Not very good. For a good and funny article, you need grammar. Punctuation, like commas and apostrophes, are strongly recommended, and you have too little periods. Safari and Firefox are good web browsers for spellchecking your article, too.
Images: 3 You only have two pictures, and only one of them made me laugh.
Miscellaneous: 3.5 Avg'd
Final Score: 17.5 This is a 17.5. In short, this article is bad. Rewrite it while reading HTBFANJS, and then put it back in here for judgement. Doing a spelling and grammar check will work here, too. Or you can just put it on VFD. VFD is a better choice.
Reviewer: Sire !! -4- (18:40 01-3-2009)
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